Room 42

Jun. 6th, 2011 06:36 pm
kebab1806: (That was dramatic)
[personal profile] kebab1806
TITLE : Room 42
PAIRING : Jared/Jensen
WARNINGS/ENTICEMENTS : only the usual m/m sex (duh), voyeurism, dubcon (if you squint and look at it upside down), really bad dirty talk, rimming…that’s it I think.
SUMMARY: Jensen’s horny and Jared’s just passing by.
DISCLAIMER: No one in this story belongs to me, trust me if they did I wouldn't be writing about it ;p
A/N : This is my first attempt at writing anything and I blame it all on [ profile] eviltwin, this is all for you hon :D Any useful concrit is more than welcome, I could do with some pointers.

It'd been a long day, Jared only had one more job to do and then he was free to go home and crash. He longed for his shower, all he wanted was to wash the sweat and grime from his body and then spend an evening in front of the tv. He was just heading towards room 54 of the motel he was currently working at, when a moan drifted through an open window. Without thinking Jared peeked in the window, checking that the occupant wasn't some fifty-something travelling salesman having a heart attack. What he did see had his breath catching in his throat.


Jensen let the door swing shut behind him. It had been one hell of a week, with the temperatures staying in the high nineties every day. Normally he wouldn't complain about it - being from Texas he was used to the heat - but working in it was a different matter. The construction site he was currently working on was in the early stages, the houses wouldn't be ready to move into for another few months yet, and there was little shade to be found.

Flopping on the bed, Jensen pulled off his top, the sweat causing it to stick to his body and drag across his nipples, sending a shiver down his spine. Running his hand over his chest Jensen started absently playing with them; it had been way too long since he had been laid and his body was craving any touch.

When his nipples became too sensitive Jensen began stroking over his abs, loving the touch and how it was arousing him. Lost in the sensation he didn't even notice his hand edging towards the waistband of his jeans until he felt the rough material starting to scrape at his knuckles. By now he was too far gone to
care that he hadn't taken the time to close the curtains, all he knew was that he wanted to get off, he needed to feel that spark deep in his gut. Shoving his hand in completely he took hold of himself and squeezed, moaning at the feeling.


Jared stood watching as the sexiest guy he had ever seen fondled himself. It was obvious the guy was in it for the long haul, getting the most out of every little sensation. Jared could feel himself getting hard in his work jeans as he watched the guys hand moving under his own jeans. He'd seen the guy at the new gated community that was being built over by the old movie theatre when he'd done that favour for his house mate, had thought about just going over and asking him out, but had chickened out at the last minute. There was no way he was letting this opportunity pass him by though.

Dragging himself away from the glorious sight in front of him, Jared quickly made his way towards the reception, grateful when he found the owners' daughter there instead of one of her parents.

"Hey, Candice, just got a report of a leaky pipe in room 42, could ya give me the key so I can get in and have a look?" Jared flashed his dimples, knowing the effect they could have.

"Sure Jared, do you want me to call Dad to get him to help?" Candice replied, blushing as she handed him the key.

"Nah, we don't need to bother him, it's probably just an old washer or something. Two minute job," Jared said, backing out of the door.

As soon as he was out of her sight he sped up, desperate to get back before he missed the show completely. When he got back to the window, he stopped to make sure the guy was still occupied and nearly swallowed his tongue as he watched the guy's hand moving lower than it had before. While Jared had been gone the guy had obviously got bored with his dick and was trying to finger himself with his jeans still on.

Moving to the door, Jared quietly slid the key into the lock, grateful that the owners kept up the maintenance on the place and knowing his entrance would be silent. Carefully shutting the door behind him, Jared turned his attention once more to the bed, watching as the guy became frustrated at not being able to get enough of what he needed.

Jared was so engrossed that he didn't realise he'd started moving until his knees hit the bed in between the guy's spread legs. Startled, Jared's eyes flew up to the guy's face, waiting for the shouting to start, and he was surprised to find nothing but desire reflected back at him.


The stranger's name was Jared, according to his work shirt, but Jensen barely paid attention to it. He just knew that he wanted him.

"Undo your jeans," Jared growled, his voice deep and lust-filled. Jensen obeyed immediately and it wasn't long before Jared had the jeans and underwear bunched around Jensen's ankles, his boots the only thing keeping them on.

"Oh god, please touch me," Jensen whimpered, hand moving towards his erection until Jared's hand shot out and caught Jensen's wrist, stilling his hand.

"Don't touch yourself," Jared ordered. "Stand up."

Once Jensen was on his feet Jared stood and moved forward, crushing his mouth to Jensen’s, pressing his whole body against him. He could feel Jensen's dick, hot and hard against his thigh, knew Jensen would be able to feel Jared's own erection rubbing against his stomach. He couldn't stop his hips from pressing forward into Jensen, rubbing himself against him, all the while exploring Jensen's mouth with his tongue, tasting him.

The desperate noises Jensen was making were getting to Jared, as if they were wired directly to his cock.

Each one sent a wave of arousal through him and he couldn't get enough of them. He was so lost in learning all the sounds Jensen could make and his own reaction to them, that Jensen’s sudden surge forward caught him by surprise and he staggered backwards, back slamming into the wall. Trying to catch his breath, Jared watched as Jensen sank gracefully to his knees and ran his hands up Jared's legs, squeezing gently at the muscles he found. Once his hands reached Jared's belt, nimble fingers went to work and before Jared knew what was going on his fly was undone and his hands were buried in Jensen's hair, without any conscious thought from himself.

Jensen knelt there for a couple of moments taking in the sight of Jared's gorgeous dick. He knew he was a size queen, could freely admit that to himself and knew if he was presented with the right dick he could turn into the world's biggest slut. This was the right dick, it was proportional to the man it belonged to and Jensen hoped Jared knew how to use it. He wasn't sure at first when he'd realised he wasn't alone in his room, thought maybe he'd give the pervert that walked in on him while he was rubbing one out a show and that would be it. Then maybe, once the guy had spoken and he'd lost his pants, that it could be mutual handjobs. Now he knew for sure that he wasn't letting this stranger leave until the guy had been buried balls deep in Jensen's ass. Jensen wanted to know how full he would feel with all of that monstrous cock up his ass, wasn't even sure he could take it all, but was willing to give it a damn good try.

Shaking himself out of his thoughts, before he blew his load and ended this a lot earlier than he wanted, Jensen took Jared into his mouth and didn't stop until he was nestled in Jensen's throat, Jared's neatly trimmed pubes tickling his nose. Swallowing Jensen moaned at the feel of that cock down his throat. There was nothing he liked more than sucking dick - well, apart from a nice long, hard fuck.

Backing off slightly, Jensen started to lick around the head, teasing the slit with the tip of his tongue, tasting the precome that oozed out. He kept this up until he felt Jared's balls drawing up to his body and thought, hell no. Jensen would be damned if he was wasting this opportunity. Grabbing Jared’s
balls he tugged them away from his body, stopping the guy's orgasm in its tracks. Pulling off completely, Jensen licked his lips and stood up, watching as Jared swayed slightly, as if his legs couldn't support his own weight.

Kicking off his boots and freeing his feet from his jeans, Jensen bent to rifle through his pockets, snagging the condom and lube he always kept on him. Crawling onto the bed, Jensen looked back over his shoulder at Jared, eyes full of lust and desire. "Fuck me hard, right? I wanna feel you for days."

Not needing to be told twice Jared practically pounced on Jensen, smothering him with his body, rubbing his dick against Jensen's balls, mimicking what he wanted to do to Jensen's ass. Jensen pushed back into Jared's thrusts, begging with his body, and all he could think about was getting Jared inside him.

Jared started pressing kisses along Jensen's spine, taking his time, teasing Jensen the way Jared felt Jensen had teased him with the unfinished blow job. Once he got to the base of Jensen's spine he sunk his teeth against one of Jensen's meaty cheeks, relishing the hiss that escaped Jensen's lips and the feel of Jensen pushing back against him.

Jared loved all of Jensen's reactions, he loved all the noises he was pulling from this gorgeous guy. As Jared breathed in he caught the musky smell of Jensen. It had been clear when Jared first entered the room that the guy had just finished a long day labouring, the smell of sweat and Jensen’s arousal filling the air. Jared couldn't help it - the smell triggered something in him and he just needed to get closer to it, to really taste Jensen. Spreading Jensen so he could see his puckered hole, Jared swiped his tongue across it, making Jensen yelp and rut back for more.

"Oh God, please, please, do it, I wanna feel your tongue in me, wanna feel you eating my ass." Jensen couldn't have stopped the words spilling from his mouth if he'd tried, not that he was going to.

"Gonna give you what you need darlin', don't you worry about that. Gonna get my tongue so deep, gonna taste all of you," Jared promised, before going back to circling his tongue around Jensen's hole, bathing it completely. With a sudden push, Jared breached Jensen, moaning as the taste exploded on his tongue.

Bringing his hands up, Jared grabbed Jensen's hips, stilling his frantic movements. If he hadn't Jared was sure Jensen would have pushed him off the bed with the force of his thrusts.

Jensen couldn't get enough of Jared's tongue. Yeah he'd been rimmed before, had enjoyed it, but there was something about this guy that just had Jensen so turned on and that thing he did with his tongue, when he moved it just so, Jensen was sure he wouldn't be able to uncurl his toes anytime soon. Yet, as much as he was loving this, it wasn't quite enough, didn't reach deep enough for Jensen to be really satisfied. The guy seemed to have settled in for the long haul, though. If Jensen wanted more he knew he would have to be the one to move things along and so, pulling away from Jared, he turned around and pushed him onto his back.

"Wanna ride you," was all the warning Jared got before Jensen was straddling him and lining up Jared's dick, slowly sinking down onto it.

"Guh, so big," Jensen grunted, pulling up only to sink down again, taking more of Jared inside of him.

"Oh my God," was all Jared could say, because seriously, how was the guy so tight? Okay, they had only used spit as lube and the only loosening had been from Jared's tongue, but Jared had had virgins that weren't this tight. It felt as if a vice had gripped his dick and was trying to squeeze all the cum
out of him.

Sucking in deep breaths Jensen concentrated on getting as much of that glorious cock inside of him as possible. He'd never felt so full and he wasn't even half way down. Pulling all the way off Jensen held himself above Jared and ran his fingers down behind his balls, searching for his hole. Letting two of his fingers sink easily inside himself Jensen slowly started working at opening himself up for Jared.

"Take all the time you need," he heard Jared say from beneath him. Jensen pulled his fingers out and brought them to his mouth, wetting them before returning them to Jared’s cock, rubbing them around the head and lubing him up then guiding it back to his entrance, sinking down until his ass rested on Jared's pelvis.

Jared gently thrust up into the vice like grip, testing if Jensen was comfortable.

"Oh wow, that's amazing," Jensen gasped. "You would not believe how full I feel." All the time Jensen was working himself on Jared's cock, using it to stretch himself further. "Time to get a condom on you,"

Jensen said, pulling off of Jared and reaching for the lube and condom he'd left on the bed.

Ripping open the packet Jensen reached back and slid the condom on Jared, grateful that he only carried magnums. Squeezing the lube into his hand, he coated Jared's dick, dragging a hiss from the guy, before sinking back down on Jared.

Once Jared found himself encased in Jensen's heat again all his control went. His hips snapped up, nailing Jensen's prostate on the first go, dragging a yell from him. Jensen started riding for all he was worth, bouncing on Jared’s cock.

"Ah, ah, so fucking big, ah, feels so good inside me, want you to fuck me hard..." Jensen gasped, moaning as Jared's thrusts increased in pace. "Want you to fuck me doggy style," he pleaded, pulling off of Jared.

Turning round he spread his legs wider and presented his ass for Jared, moaning loudly as Jared sank back inside him.

Jared couldn't believe his luck, of all the windows he had been passing, he had been lucky enough to glance into this man's. This man who had been spread out on the bed stroking himself in full view of anyone passing. If that wasn't an invitation Jared didn't know much about it, especially with the way he was begging for his dick like nobody else had before. All of this flashed through Jared's mind as he slammed his hips forward again and again, slapping his skin against this Adonis' ass. The more he thought about it the hotter Jared became, lust coursing through his veins, speeding up his thrusts until he was certain he was going to explode. Reaching underneath Jensen he started stroking the rock hard cock matching the speed of his thrusts, making the man's cries get higher in pitch and volume.

"Fuck, oh fuck, oh yeah, oh god, oh god, ohgodohgodohgod," Jensen cried as he spilled over the bed, falling forward as his arms gave out.

At the feel of Jensen's ass clamping down on him, knowing it would send him over the edge Jared pulled out, he had other plans for where he came. As the first jet of cum left Jensen's dick Jared rolled him over and sank his mouth down over it, drinking down the rest of his load and causing Jensen to scream with pleasure, prolonging his orgasm. As Jensen came down from the most intense orgasm of his life, Jared climbed up and straddled Jensen's chest, stroking his cock in hard, fast jerks. Jensen knew what he wanted and opened his mouth sticking his tongue out ready to catch whatever Jared gave him. At the sight Jared lost the little control he had left and watched as he painted Jensen's cheeks and eyelashes, finally hitting Jensen's tongue, which disappeared back inside Jensen's mouth, drawing a moan from Jensen as he savoured the taste.

After what felt like a lifetime, when they had both caught their breath, Jared laid down along side Jensen, trailing his fingers through the drying cum on his face. "Jared," he whispered, stroking over a high cheekbone.

"Jensen," came the reply, as the guy pressed his face into Jared's touch.

"So Jensen, how long are you here for? Cos I wouldn't mind doing that again," Jared smirked.

Date: 2011-06-06 06:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
God, so hot. *dies*

And you can come forth from under your rock. There's really no need to. It was hot and well written and did I mention hot. :D That's the only thing a PWP needs to be. HOT!!!!!

Date: 2011-06-06 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
*blushes* thanks hon, I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure if it was too cheesy.

Date: 2011-06-06 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I'm surprised the rock you're hiding didn't explode. Whew...that Hot just doesn't seem to be a sufficient word.....

Date: 2011-06-06 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thanks hon, it means a lot to me.

Date: 2011-06-06 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I'm just gonna go ahead and leave this here:


Date: 2011-06-06 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
That damn picture.....see I told you it was all your fault. Showing me stuff like this and then somehow tricking me in to writing porn about it.

Date: 2011-06-06 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Wait this sounds like something else I am doing right now...

Date: 2011-06-06 07:06 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-06-06 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]

~flustered, and more than a little bit turned on~

Date: 2011-06-06 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I'm gonna take that as a compliment.....I think :)

Glad you liked it hon.

Date: 2011-06-06 07:07 pm (UTC)
deanshot1: (breathless)
From: [personal profile] deanshot1
Came here because [ profile] alienat told usa bout your awesome fic and it was so worth it.
Fantastic story.
So hot and incredibely delicious.
Thanks for making my Monday night.

Date: 2011-06-06 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
You're welcome, glad you enjoyed it :D

Thank you so much for the feedback, I'm kinda nervous about people's reactions.
Edited Date: 2011-06-06 07:14 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-06-06 07:16 pm (UTC)
deanshot1: (Butterfly)
From: [personal profile] deanshot1
You're welcome and you have no need to be nervous because it is brilliant and for your first fic which makes it even better.

Date: 2011-06-06 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
awww shucks *blushes*

Date: 2011-06-06 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
wow - awesome PWP, very hot from the first moment to the last xxx

Date: 2011-06-06 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh wow, thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it :D

Date: 2011-06-07 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
~dances over in the 'told you so' corner~


Date: 2011-06-07 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
*glares* no one likes a know it all you know that right?


Date: 2011-06-07 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
~throws in a bit of running man for good measure~

(need to make a gif of this dance.)

Date: 2011-06-07 03:48 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-06-07 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
OMG...........My brain is combusting from the hottness of the story. WOW.

Date: 2011-06-07 11:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much, I'm glad (and relieved) that people seem to like it :)

Thanks for the wonderful comment.

Date: 2011-06-07 12:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Came here to have a look on eviltwins recommendation, and OMG that was sooo hot I dont have anymore coherent thoughts left to share

Date: 2011-06-07 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the lovely comment :D

Date: 2011-06-07 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Come out from under your rock hun, no need to hide 'cause that was hot!

Date: 2011-06-07 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
No I wanna stay here, it's safe and nobody can point and laugh :D

I'm glad you liked it hon, thanks for commenting.

Date: 2011-06-08 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
lol! It is nice and safe isn't it? But wonce you get the writing bug, that's it - there's no going back now *grins*

Date: 2011-06-08 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I know, damn Evil keeps poking my muse with lovely pics that are just begging for fics to go with them *pouts*

Happy Birthday btw, I hope you've had a brilliant day.

Date: 2011-06-08 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I have thanks m'dear - breakfast in bed and hubby cooked tea, and semi naked from evil, more could I want lol!

Date: 2011-06-07 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
So I think I'm leaving a comment, not totally sure, more than just in a daze! This was freaking hot, total porn!! Loved it.

Date: 2011-06-07 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you for the lovely comment, I'm glad you liked it. Sorry for the daze :D

Date: 2011-06-13 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh wow, So hot! This definitely made my day MUCH Better!

Date: 2011-06-14 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thanks, I'm glad I could improve your day :D

Thanks for the lovely comment.

Date: 2011-07-10 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]

*thud* Can't... breathe... Wow!


Date: 2011-07-11 11:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Hands you oxygen and fans you.

Glad you liked it hon, thanks for the wonderful comment :D
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